Michael Barker recommended That Obscure Object of Desire (1977) in Movies (curated)
J&J Official 7 Minute Workout
Health & Fitness and Lifestyle
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The workout that helps you make every minute count! With more than 2 million downloads, The Johnson...
11000 Quotes, Sayings & Status - Daily Inspiration
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Read, share and save over 11,000+ quotes by famous people, sayings and status in over 300+...
The Tao of Daily Life
Book
The Tao of Daily Life combines ancient Eastern wisdom with practical application-perfect for busy...
Personal growth Religion Philosophy Tao Taoism Motivation
Kiwake Alarm Clock - Take back your mornings
Lifestyle and Utilities
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Tired of oversleeping? If you really want to stop hitting the snooze button, then Kiwake is the best...
Dietrition Pro - Weight Loss diets
Health & Fitness and Medical
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Have you struggled with diet plans in the past? Are you looking for a diet plan solution that works?...
The biggest issue I had with this was the inconsistent writing. It would change temporally quite a bit and there were some issues with paragraph breaks as well. Whenever a new person speaks, it should have a new line break, but most of the time, this was not the case. A lot of the characters had similar tones as well, so it made it difficult to tell who was speaking at times.
One piece of advice I would give is to slow down. Some things happen too quickly, especially at the beginning, so if the author slowed down, took the time to get into the "why" of the actions instead of rushing to get to the next plot point, I think the book would greatly benefit from it.
Overall, super cool concept and ideas with where the story is going!
I gave this a three star review, not because I didn't like it, I did. But there is work that needs to go into it for me to really enjoy it more.
Life After Care
Book
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Dark Tourism: Practice and Interpretation
Glenn Hooper and John J. Lennon
Book
Dark Tourism, as well as other terms such as Thanatourism and Grief Tourism, has been much discussed...
Muslims and American Politics: Identity, Community, and National Attachment in Post-September 11th America
Book
Identity. We all have one, although it's not always clear what creates and sustains it. Things...